Ascending Vol.1 Pg 66

I know my action lines are amateur, but i don't care. What matters is that I improve in later pages, not edits.  
Speaking of edits, the anatomy has been improved since the last time page 66 was submitted. The edit includes additions such as the feathers from Nixie (see previous page), and two new panels. The two bottom panels will result in an additional two new pages added to Chapter 2. This also means, I will be editing pages number and updating the links in the descriptions to make pages easier to read. It's work, but it's worth it.  

I'll make one more edit, and then you will all see the next two additions following page 66. 

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Ascending: a manga inspired by James Patterson's Maximum Ride series. Story and Art by Maxim Wolf. Plot and characters are original. Hand-drawn.

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