Ascending Vol.1 Page 93 Panel Rough Sketch

Should I have the camera facing into the barrel of the gun? Or should I save that shot for later and just view the Commander's hairy clawed finger closing on the trigger?
And......Ha! I wrote it in German so most can't read it!

Ascending: a manga inspired by James Patterson's Maximum Ride series. Story and Art by Maxim Wolf. Plot and characters are original. Hand-drawn.
Ascending©Maxim Wolf (me)